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It started with the fire,
In her eyes glowed an impetuous desire.

As magic has and magic will,
What promises might this mystery fulfill?

Trouble comes from all different peaks,
The girl with the charm is the one who seeks.

Innocent ardor may it have seemed,
But in her eyes showed a pestiferous gleam.

Ever cautious she lifted the dome,
Heart throbbing she let her excitement roam.

Panting in and out,
Watching hellish monstrosity go about.

Lips creeping up at each corner,
Her job had been done, the world now in horror.
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Bailey
2/4/2011 01:31:05 am

The rhyme scheme and the rhythm of your poem are both very consistent, and you used very impressive vocabulary. It was also descriptive about each emotion that led to Pandora making the mistake she did.

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Ms. Miller
3/6/2011 10:50:23 pm

Awesome poem! I love that you use imagery in the last stanza to show the deviousness of Pandora, and your language is sophisticated and vivid. 100%

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